OnePiece

[Bishop]

Nagyon tetszett a chapter, de én is már azt akarom hogy újra együtt legyen a banda, az mondjuk egyértelmű hogy nem a többiek körében ébredt fel, mert nem hiszem hogy Boa csak úgy kiküldött pár hajót hogy keressék már fel őket, maguktól meg nem tudnának odajutni mert nem is hiszem hogy tudják hogy ott van de a calm belt sem az a hely ahol egyszerű utazni. Remélem Jimbei csatlakozik, egyre jobban kedvelem, valahogy úgy tudnám elképzelni hogy most elmennek shabondy-ba mert Luffy észreveszi hogy a vivre card oda mutat és rájön hogy van még kiket megvédenie stb. Ott aztán csatlakoznak újra aztán irány fishman island ahol ép káosz van. Ha Luffy rendet rak ott csak akkor mehet Jimbei vele különben nem. Bírnám ha Luffy kikiáltaná a szigetet a magáénak és senki se merne odamenni Igaz ez csak álom marad azért Luffy híres de nem annyira hogy ne merjenek vele ujjat húzni.

Ami meg Garpot illeti, semmi haki nincs ott simán csak comic relief, mint mikor Nami púposra veri. Amugy meg ez a nem fáj mert gumiból van mindig is sántított kicsit mert Luffy legtöbb komolyabb harcán megsérül véres lesz. Lucci pl tuti nem haki használó még is elég erőseket ütött hogy fájjon Luffy-nak.

[Zen]

Ami meg Garpot illeti, semmi haki nincs ott simán csak comic relief, mint mikor Nami púposra veri. Amugy meg ez a nem fáj mert gumiból van mindig is sántított kicsit mert Luffy legtöbb komolyabb harcán megsérül véres lesz. Lucci pl tuti nem haki használó még is elég erőseket ütött hogy fájjon Luffy-nak.

Nekem inkább az sántít h látják h az öreg aki üt nem kispályás, miért lepődnek meg? Sima noname marine pofon ha fájna, az lenne a fura.

[blackronin]

Hamarosan jönnek a 583-as spoilerek...  (nem kamu, mert ohana confirmed, aki a naruto és a bleach topicba is beküldte a heti spoilereket)
Csak egy kis türelem...

edit: a japán script
[spoiler]
Source: 2 ch
Credits: ohana
Quote:
549 ：ohana ◆IR7jauNn4E ：2010/05 /01(土) 18:11:49 ID:i6UR4y1XP
来てたら、ごめん頼まれたので。

583　不確かな物の終着駅

飯と水は用意してやるから、肉が食べたいなら自分で用意しろとダダン
雑用はルフィの仕事。

どこかへ出掛けるエース
雑用なんかしないで、エースを追うルフィ
エースだけ先に帰宅
１週間後ボロボロになってルフィ帰宅

それでも、毎日毎日１カ月２カ月とエースの後を追うルフィ

３か月を越えたころ　ゴミばかりのグレイターミナルにつく

そのそばの木の上に　サボ
サボを呼ぶエース
エースとサボは悪さをして、海賊貯金をしている
そこにルフィ。俺も海賊になるんだと。
エースをサボの秘密を知ってしまったルフィ
エースサボはルフィを木に縛り殺そうとするが出来ない。（まだ人をころしたことがないから）

そこに大男
エースは、コイツから金を盗った
大男はエースを探している
ルフィ捕まる　助けを求めるルフィ

大男、エースを知ってるのかとルフィに聞く
知ってる
金のありかをしらないか？
知らない（ルフィは嘘が下手）

思い出させてやるよ～！連れ去る。

助ける？見捨てる？
次号。


556 ：ohana ◆IR7jauNn4E ：2010/05 /01(土) 18:18:24 ID:i6UR4y1XP
>>554
大男の名は
ブルージャム海賊団　船員ポルシェーミ
見た目は　ロン毛のデカイ人
[/spoiler]
Gondolom, hogy a translation is már úton van...

Egy már bizonyos:
[spoiler]Az egész chapter Luffy és Ace flashback.[/spoiler]

edit2: egy kép (az oldal alján)
[spoiler]
http://forum.onemanga.com/showthread.php?t=76975

A srác, aki látható, az Sabo, valószínűleg Ace haverja...
Érdekes hogy Ace sapiját viseli... 

Ja és ha nem tudjátok, hogy miért fontos ez a Sabo név, akkor itt a válasz:
http://www.onemanga.com/One_Piece/574/10/
(középső párbeszéd)
[/spoiler]

[Squazee2005]

Korai spoilerek  és  . Szabó... 

[blackronin]

Na itt a kép a Szabóról... 
[spoiler]

[/spoiler]

more pics:
[spoiler]
Cover - Thrirrer Bark story 1.

Ace and Luffy

Ace and Sabo

Luffy and Giant Pirate

[/spoiler]

edit: a spoiler fordítása az AP-ről...
[spoiler]
Originally Posted by Aohige_AP 
ohana's script:

Chapter 583: Final Destination for the Uncertain

Dadan tells Luffy she'll give him food and water, but if he wants meat he's gonna have to get it himself.
She also makes Luffy do errands in the house

Ace is off to somewhere
Luffy goes after luffy, abandoning his errands
Ace comes back to the house first
Luffy comes back to the house a week later, all beat up

But Luffy goes after Ace every day month after month.
After three month or so, he arrives at the Gray Terminal, where there's heaps of trash.

Sabo is sitting on top of the tree nearby
Ace calls Sabo up
Ace and Sabo are doing crooked things to save up hidden savings for piracy
Luffy arrives and tells them he's gonna be a pirate too
Luffy now knows Sabo and Ace's secret
Ace and Sabo ties Luffy to a tree and tries to kill him, but can't (they've never killed anyone yet)

A large man who Ace stole the money from appears, and is looking for Ace
Luffy is caught by the man, and asks for help

The large man asks Luffy if he knows Ace, and he answers yes
He then asks where the money is, but Luffy tells him he doens't know (Luffy is terrible at lying)

The man tells Luffy well then, I'll make you remember, and takes him away

Will Ace & Sabo save Luffy or not?
End of chapter
[/spoiler]

Sajnos így első látásra BORZASZTÓAN UNALMAS fejezet elé nézünk... 
De hát tudtam, hogy egyszer véget ér a sikerszéria... 

[LuckyDingo]

Na itt a kép a Szabóról... 
[spoiler]

[/spoiler]

more pics:
[spoiler]
Cover - Thrirrer Bark story 1.

Ace and Luffy

Ace and Sabo

Luffy and Giant Pirate

[/spoiler]

edit: a spoiler fordítása az AP-ről...
[spoiler]
Originally Posted by Aohige_AP 
ohana's script:

Chapter 583: Final Destination for the Uncertain

Dadan tells Luffy she'll give him food and water, but if he wants meat he's gonna have to get it himself.
She also makes Luffy do errands in the house

Ace is off to somewhere
Luffy goes after luffy, abandoning his errands
Ace comes back to the house first
Luffy comes back to the house a week later, all beat up

But Luffy goes after Ace every day month after month.
After three month or so, he arrives at the Gray Terminal, where there's heaps of trash.

Sabo is sitting on top of the tree nearby
Ace calls Sabo up
Ace and Sabo are doing crooked things to save up hidden savings for piracy
Luffy arrives and tells them he's gonna be a pirate too
Luffy now knows Sabo and Ace's secret
Ace and Sabo ties Luffy to a tree and tries to kill him, but can't (they've never killed anyone yet)

A large man who Ace stole the money from appears, and is looking for Ace
Luffy is caught by the man, and asks for help

The large man asks Luffy if he knows Ace, and he answers yes
He then asks where the money is, but Luffy tells him he doens't know (Luffy is terrible at lying)

The man tells Luffy well then, I'll make you remember, and takes him away

Will Ace & Sabo save Luffy or not?
End of chapter
[/spoiler]

Sajnos így első látásra BORZASZTÓAN UNALMAS fejezet elé nézünk... 
De hát tudtam, hogy egyszer véget ér a sikerszéria... 

Ha unod ne olvasd
Én azt mondom hogy kell ez. /eddig azt mondtam, nem, de beletörődtem és látom hova akar Oda kilyukadni/ Kis visszaemlékezés, miniarc úgymond. Elég ciki volt, hogy szinte semmit nem tudtunk a főszereplő múltjáról. Szerintem 2-3 ilyen chapter nem fog ártani. [spoiler]A végén Ace és Sabo megmenti Luffyt, de Sabot véletlen megölik és akkor Ace besokkol, esetleg a halálos ágyán megígéri Sabonak, hogy ő lesz a legerősebb kalóz vagy valami meg hogy ezentúl vigyáz Luffyra. És akkor hűdekiderül minden és vissza a jelenbe.[/spoiler]
Ha nem ez lesz, akkor meg simán lehet még jó..

[Squazee2005]

Nekem [spoiler]ez a Szabó-gyerek (na jó, Sabo) nem tűnik egy szimpatikus karakternek. Előfordulhat, hogy ő az igazi bajkeverő srác, nem pedig Ace. Lehet, hogy először ellenezni fogja Luffy megmentését, de Ace önállósítja magát vagy ilyesmi. Eddig ez a tippem, de ki tudja.
[/spoiler]
Én örülök a fejezetnek.

[Zen]

Odát ismerve biztos fasza visszaemlékezés lesz ez is, de mint a többit, ezt is olyankor vágja a képünkbe amikor a fősztori sokkal érdekesebb (+ SH legénység hiány), ráadásul ennek még a végét is előre tudni.. -_-

[blackronin]

Odát ismerve biztos fasza visszaemlékezés lesz ez is, de mint a többit, ezt is olyankor vágja a képünkbe amikor a fősztori sokkal érdekesebb (+ SH legénység hiány), ráadásul ennek még a végét is előre tudni.. -_-

Egyszerűen kifejezve: az időzítés rossz.


edit: full script fordítása
[spoiler]
Chapter 583: Final Destination of Uncertainty (The Gray Terminal)
Cover is Hogback and Absalom looking for a mate

Luffy: I HATE mountain bandits!!
Dadan: shuddup damn brat, we're already upset we have to deal with the likes of you.
If you don't wanna stay here, feel free to go out there and starve yourself to death!!
bandit: calm down, boss

Luffy looks at Ace eating heaps of meat with hunger
Luffy: There's not enough food, I want to eat that meat too!!
Dadan: All these meat are from wild bull Ace hunted!! He gives us our share, and that's how it's on our plates. Mountain Bandits aren't doing too well these days
We're gonna work you to death from tomorrow!! We'll have you clean, wash clothes, shine our shoes, and shine our weapons! As well as robbing, stealing, conning, and murdering people!
And never rat on Garp on what you're forced to do here!!
Dadan scolds Luffy while eating the meat

A rice bowl and a cup is shown
Dadan: one bowl of rice, and one cup of water! That's all we'll gurantee you...
the rest, you have to get yourself!! And grow up on your own!
Luffy: Alright
Dadan: Oh you're alright with this!? This is where you're supposed to cry!!
Luffy: I've been thrown into the jungle by my grampa before.
I can eat worms, frogs, snakes, and mushrooms all I want in the forest
If I'm gonna become a pirate one day, I have to be able to do at least that by myself!

Ace walks out of the room
Luffy: Where is he going?
Dadan: No, where are YOU going!! ...did you just say pirates!?

Luffy walks out of the room, after Ace
Dadan: Look at him!! He's too tough for a little boy... that's why I hate having to look after Garp's grandkids!!!
Bandit: calm down, boss

Ace notices Luffy following him
Ace: ......
Luffy: Hey!! My name is Luffy!! I'm not mad at you for spitting on me anymore!!
Ace: .....

Flashback to Shanks in the bar
Luffy: Why are you laughing!! It's so uncool!
Shanks: All he did was pour beer on me. It's nothing to get riled up about, you know?

Back to the forest
Luffy: It's nothing to get mad about!! Hey, let's be friends!! Where are you going!?
Ace: ......
Ace without saying a word, kicks down a massive tree towards Luffy
Luffy sees the tree and panics
Luffy: huh? WAAAAAAAAA!!!!
*CRAAASH*
Luffy is flattened by the tree
Luffy: AAAAAAA
Ace looks at the disaster without a care in the world

Ace is crossing a bridge, and Luffy catches up to him, and Ace notices him
Luffy: *pant pant*
Ace: !?

Ace walks up to Luffy, and strikes him with a stick
Luffy: Gyaa!!
Luffy is knocked off the bridge, and falls into the canyon below
Luffy: AAAAAaaaaaaaa.........

Scene changes to night time
A bandit with a turban asks Ace
Turban: Ace... you came back alone?
Ace: .........
Turban: Where's Luffy!? Weren't you together?
Ace: who knows

Turban: Hey boss!! He's gone missing from day one!! This is not good!!!
Dadan: Who gives a damn!! If he dies, he dies, we can't do anything about it!
Dadan responds while gulping down beer

Dadan: First of all, we're already given up on looking after Ace!!
I don't care where he goes off to die, we'll just tell Garp it was an accident
but no, he keeps on living just like the saying, the the more hated the boy is, the more power he gains in the world!
(Japanese saying "Hated child, successful in the world")

Ace is listening to Dadan
Ace: ........
Dadan: He's the son of the devil!! Think what will happen if the government finds out!
You know what they'll do to us!?
Bandit: calm down, boss

Ace listens to them silently

Scene changes to one week later
Bandit: Boss!! Dadan, ma'am!! Luffy came back alive!!
Dadan: He's still alive!?
Bandit: calm down, boss
Dadan: Where the hell were you!!

Luffy is in tatters

Turban: Hey, where were you and what were you doing?
Luffy: I was being chased by wolves at bottom of the cliff
Turban: Below the cliff!? What did you go there for!?

The scene changes to their sleeping room, and Luffy is thrown onto the floor of the room
Dadan: Sleep for now!! Starting tomorrow, you're gonna work hard for us!!
Ace: .......
Ace notices Luffy, and opens one of his eyes to see him, but doesn't say a word

Luffy slept well and morning came
Luffy goes after Ace leaving the bandit hideout
Luffy: Hey Ace!! You're going somewhere again!?
Ace: !

Ace notices Luffy

Luffy: Take me with you!! Let's be friends!
Ace: ..........

Ace runs off without saying anything, and Luffy runs after him
Luffy: Hey wait up!! I'm not gonna lose you this time!

Turban: Hey boss!! He went out again, chasing after Ace!!
Dadan: Damn you Luffy!!! You're supposed to do errands for us!! ... the damn kid won't obey a single word!!

Eight days later
Luffy is falling into a river of gigantic aligators, and Ace is standing atop of the rock

Ten days later
Ace hurls huge rocks from atop a cliff at Luffy, and runs away

Luffy is searching for Ace, while a gigantic serpent is moving in close behind him

Luffy keeps losing sight of Ace, but doesn't give up looking for him day after day after day
A month passes. Two months passes
Luffy is shown almost captured by a gigantic bird

Rainy day, windy day
day after day Luffy chases after Ace
Luffy is spewing water from his mouth, after he was thrown into a waterfall by Ace, and saved by Turban

Three month passed as Luffy relentlessly chased Ace
Luffy is surrounded by gigantic tigers and bears, as Ace looks down on him from above

Luffy: *pant* haah...
Luffy comes out of the forest
Luffy: Oh... I'm out of the forest.....

Outside of Colbo mountain where the Dadan family hides out, there's a place reeking of foul stench
The massive heaps of trash here is burning up smoke from natural fire of the sun every day

Luffy: *GAG* Oh god, it stinks here!! What the hell is this place!?

A large mountain of trash is seen
Unneeded things gather here. As well as unneeded people

A man holding a blade stands in front of Luffy
Man: Hey kid... out of my way....
Trash heap resident: It's a murderer!!!
Another resident: He went that way!!

Of course, the place is lawless
there are no doctors either, and the place is full of crime and disease
This is the Final Destination of Uncertainty, the "Gray Terminal"

Luffy notices Ace sneaking up a mountain of trash
Ace whispers
Ace: Sabo! Sabo, are you here?

Sabo: Hey Ace
Ace: Sorry for being late
Sabo: Yeah you are late. I've already finished a job at the town
Sabo smiles
Ace: I see. Well guess what, so did I!

Ace is carrying tons of money, and Sabo is surprised

A young boy wearing a silk hat with goggles
Sabo [10 years old] A boy living in Gray Terminal

Sabo grabs the cash
Sabo: Whoa, awesome!! You got more than I did!! This is a lot of cash, how did you do it!?
Ace: I took them from bunch of punks near the gate!! They might be transporters for some merchant ship

Sabo: Damn!! you beat me again!
The two chat as they open a hidden safe in the ground
Inside the safe is full of money, jewerly, and rare metals

They continue to chat while looking at it
Ace: Who cares who wins!! It's our stash of pirate savings we're both going to use together some day!
It's been five years since we started to save this up... it was hell to gather all this
Sabo: Yeah! I wonder how much we need to buy a pirate ship
Ace: Who knows.... thousands, millions, we still have long way to go!
Hurry and put it away, who knows who will see us.....

Luffy was watching and listening them from below
Luffy: Pirate ship!? You guys gonna be pirates!?

Ace and Sabo notices Luffy, and panics
Luffy: Me too!!

Luffy comes to Ace, but Ace ties him up with a rope
Luffy: So Ace, this is where you come to every day!?
Ace: Shut up
Sabo: So this is that Luffy guy you were telling me about
Ace: So you finally came all the way here.... I didn't even use any path a human could walk through
Luffy: Are you friend of Ace!? Hey, let's be friends!
Sabo: Shut up

Sabo: That's why I told you to live here with me!!
The every day round trip you call the mountain path training really bit you in the ass now!
What should we do?
Ace: He knows our secret now.... if we leave him be, he'll tell someone

Ace: .... let's kill him
Sabo: yeah, let's
Luffy: WHAAAAAAT!??

Sabo holds Luffy's head down to the ground
Sabo: Stay quite, you idiot
Luffy: I didn't think you guys were gonna kill me!!! Help!!! I don't wanna die!!!
Luffy cries and yells
Ace: Sabo!! Hurry and do it!!
Sabo: What are you talking about, YOU do it!
Ace: I've never killed a person!!
Sabo: Neither have I! I don't know how!!
Luffy: Heeeellllppp!!!
Sabo & Ace: SHUT UP!!!!!

Someone is coming into the forest: Hey, I heard voices from the forest!! Childrens' voices!!
Sabo: Damn!! Someone's coming!
Ace: Take off the ropes off him first!! We have to get away from here, or they'll find our treasure!
Sabo and Ace are panicking, while Luffy looks happy

A huge man with a sword (and no neck) appears
Blue Jam Pirates crew Porchemy

Porschemy: Those kids "Ace and Sabo" you're telling me about are infamous around here.
You're sure it's "Ace" that took your money, right?
Crew: Yes... it's a shame, he got me by surprise
Porschemy: What a stupid kid. To take money from our crew...!!
If Captain BlueJam hears about this, he'll kill both me and you!

Ace and Sabo are eavesdropping while hiding
Ace: Damn... that punk was a trader for BlueJam.... I laid my hands on some dangerous cash...!!
Sabo: He has a real sword!! That's Porschemy!! That guy is crazy, have you heard of him!?
He skins alive the head of anyone who loses to him in a battle!!
Ace: !!?

Sabo notices Luffy is missing from his side
Sabo: What... where is him!?
Ace: oh

Luffy is caught
Luffy: Leggo of me!! damn you-!
Ace & Sabo: What is he doing getting caught!!??
Luffy: Help mne, Ace!!
Ace: !!? That idiot said my name...!!

Porschemy: .... did you just say Ace? You know Ace?
Luffy: He's my friend!! Oh, but he did try to kill me just now

Ace: Damn him, he keeps talking!!

Porschemy: Alright, let me ask you one thing. Today, that kid Ace took our money and ran
Luffy; !
Porschemy: Do you happen to know where it is?
Luffy: ........!!!

Sabo: Oh no!! They're gonna take all our treasures!
Ace: That idiot better not say a word!!

Luffy looks away and whistles
Luffy: I... I... I dunno.....
Porshecmy: Wow you suck at lying!

Porschemy: hehe.... if you don't know, that leaves me no choice....
Porschemy carries off Luffy
Porschemy: Heh heh, I'll make you remember, don't worry....
Luffy: Hey what's that!? Leggo!! Where are you taking me, damn it!!

Ace & Sabo: ......!!!

End
[/spoiler]

Így már egy kicsit érdekesebb, de akkor se vagyok elájulva ettől a fejezettől...

[Bishop]

Ezen is túl kell esni sajnos, de már nem sok van hátra. Ezt már kézen állva kibírom 

[blackronin]

Luffy hazudik...
[spoiler]

[/spoiler]

Hát ezen behaltam! 

Végülis egészen jól csinálja. 


edit: more pics
[spoiler]




[/spoiler]

[blackronin]

Már kijött a RAW változat is, s mivel, hogy az AP már lefordították a script-et (amit én már belinkeltem ide), vehetjük úgy hogy kijött a fejezet...

583 raw:
http://sharebee.com/13198ec4


Vélemény: a szöveg egy kicsit javított rajta, de összeségében nem jött be.
Rossz az időzítés, annyira érdekes dolgot nem tudtunk meg ebből a flashback-ből, ami indokolta volna a mostani berakását...
De valljuk be, hogy az utóbbi időkben NAGYON el voltunk kényeztetve!
Így ez a mostani és a jövő heti (az biztos flashback még, de én úgy gondolom, hogy ez a 585-ben is folytatódni fog, talán az 586-os már visszatér a jelenhez) fejezet még belefér...

[chilip]

Vélemény: a szöveg egy kicsit javított rajta, de összeségében nem jött be.
Rossz az időzítés, annyira érdekes dolgot nem tudtunk meg ebből a flashback-ből, ami indokolta volna a mostani berakását...
De valljuk be, hogy az utóbbi időkben NAGYON el voltunk kényeztetve!
Így ez a mostani és a jövő heti (az biztos flashback még, de én úgy gondolom, hogy ez a 585-ben is folytatódni fog, talán az 586-os már visszatér a jelenhez) fejezet még belefér...

valaki(k) nagyon telhetetlenek, szerencséje van Oda-nak hogy azért ennyien megengedik neki hogy kicsit flashback-ezzen

[blackronin]

... még belefér...

Pontosabban szólva még belefér Oda mangaisteni voltába...
De már nagyon rezeg a léc! 
Még a végén CSAK egy sima mangaka-ként gondolok rá... 

De komolyra fordítva...

Tőlem Oda nyugodtan flashback-elhet, de azért egyáltalán nem mindegy, hogy mit rakunk be... Főleg az számít, hogy miről szól.
Én ezt a kis "kalandot" bárhol helyénvalónak találtam volna, csak éppen most nem.
Na, de ne ítélkezzünk elhamarkodottan, lehet hogy egy nagyon klassz kis cucc lesz belőle, s ténylegesen megtudunk belőle olyan információkat, ami még komoly befolyással lesz a jelenlegi eseményekre.

[Bishop]

Akár mit mondasz ezek most kellenek, 1-2 chapterbe lezajlik szépen, aztán túl vagyunk rajta, aláírom hogy mindenki már SH csapatot várja én is, de flashbackek minden arcba voltak szinte, 2-3 chapteren belül lezárul ez az arc és aztán jön Shabondy meg SH csapat.

[blackronin]

Akár mit mondasz ezek most kellenek, 1-2 chapterbe lezajlik szépen, aztán túl vagyunk rajta, aláírom hogy mindenki már SH csapatot várja én is, de flashbackek minden arcba voltak szinte, 2-3 chapteren belül lezárul ez az arc és aztán jön Shabondy meg SH csapat.

Ha befejeződik 2 fejezeten belül, akkor okés.
Ha nem, akkor hát ez van...   
Nem fogom felvágni az ereimet, ha esetleg 4-5 fejezetes lesz, bár nem fog tetszeni, de utána mondhatjuk majd: "túl vagyunk rajta".


edit: ja és FASTEST release ever!
http://www.onemanga.com/One_Piece/583/01/

[Bishop]

Én is meglepődtem hogy még mangastreamet is megelőzte, mikor megláttam OM-en már mentem MS-re azt nézek hogy WTF OM hamarabb kiadta 

[Alkyra]

Én is meglepődtem hogy még mangastreamet is megelőzte, mikor megláttam OM-en már mentem MS-re azt nézek hogy WTF OM hamarabb kiadta 

ditto.

[NLZ]

És ez hogyhogy most jött? Kicsit szokatlan.

[Zen]

Biztos maga Oda scannelte be.

[NLZ]

Oda got hackd.

[blackronin]

584:
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Már van két kép is, keresd a mangahelpers-en. Tehát a lényeg confirmed.
A fejezet röviden:
Luffy-t meg akarják kínozni a kalózok, de a DF miatt nem sikerül.
Ace és Sabo jön megmenteni őt.

Az eddigi spoiler-ből kb. ennyit tudtam leszűrni, biztosan több is van még, de az AP-n még nem nyitottak topic-ot...
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edit: képek
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edit2: "kicsi" spoiler
[spoiler]
Title: The Porchemi Incident
Cover: Crocodile and Mr. 1

Luffy is tied to the post/tree with a rope
Luffy "Let me go! (I changed this because I think they made a typo) I won't say anything!!
Porchemi: Damn brat!
Another pirate brandishes a giant mallet and gets pissed

The sound of the giant hammer's impact sounds out within a small hut on the mountain of garbage.
Luffy is being flattened by the hammer
Luffy: ....!!
The pirates get up and scream
Luffy: I ate the gom gomu fruit.
Pirates: Gyaaaaaaaaaah
Porchemi: ....

Porchemi: ....? A devil fruit? This is the real thing. Bring the gloves.
Pirates: ?!
Porchemi: Listen you damn brat, what your friend Ace stole from us was our crew's precious money.
Luffy is strung up with rope
Porchemi: You know where it/he is...so tell us!

Bam!
Luffy: !!!
Porchemi beats Luffy with spiked gloves and Luffy bleeds

Blood splatters
Pirates: ......! It worked!!
Porchemi: Don't offend pirates...our captain Bluejam is a brute.
Luffy's blood drips like water while he cries and is shown dealing with great pain.

Luffy: Gyaaaaaaaaah it hurts! I'm scared!! Save me!!
Luffy's voice sounds out throughout the mountain of garbage
Porchemi: You guys, go look for Ace and Sabo.
Pirates: Y-yes sir!

The scene changes to a forest in the Gray Terminal/Colb Mountain?
Sabo: Hurry hurry! If Porchemi and his gang make it here we're through! Hurry and move the treasure to another place--there's also the problem of how long it takes that Luffy guy to fess up!
Ace and Sabo take out the treasure and money in haste
Sabo: If they come here they won't just take this time's treasure, but our pirate savings for the past five years!


At one part of Colb mountain there's two goons looking for people and a mass of homeless people.
Guy in a hat: You say you don't know Ace and Sabo? You're the dregs of this town...stop protecting those two.
Guy with a child: Don't look down on them because they're small...they're mad dogs that can devour a tiger.
Guy carrying a small sword: Ace and Sabo...I don't see them. More important than that...you guys give us something worth money. (Totally not sure about this)
The two goons: !!?

Evening
Ace: Didn't notice it was night...alright! We've moved all the treasure!
Ace is ontop of a rock under a tree
Sabo runs in desperate to the rock Ace is at
Sabo: Hah.....haa....Ace!!
Ace: Sabo! How was it? Did they come to look for the money over there?!
Sabo: Ha...haaa...nah they didn't come to search! That Luffy guy....he still hasn't talked!
Sabo speaks while trying to catch his breath and Ace is shocked
Ace: Huh?!

A map explaining Gray Terminal is shown. A bay with pirates?
The Bluejam pirate ship is shown
Bluejam: They sure are late...hey...who was responsible for today?
Pirate: That rascal Porchemi, Captain Bluejam!
Bluejam: It's already getting dark...How much money could he have taken? That bastard...there's no way he took the money and ran, right?
Pirate: No...no way....
Bluejam has messed up teeth and a weird hairdo (I think)

Scene changes to Luffy who is all messed up
Porchemi: Cut the BS and spit it out! Ha....ha...
Porchemi is out of breath and pounding Luffy and a pirate tries to stop him
Pirate: Po-po-po-Porchemi! It's useless!
Luffy is beat up, crying and covered in blood
Pirate: This guy...he's even lost the energy to shout! He probably won't say anything...this is so brutal I can't watch.

Porchemi: If you have time to protect this brat then go find Ace and Sabo! It's our lives that are on the line!
Porchemi knocks his underling away

Some dude that lives in the garbage heap sees this
Dude: To a kid like that!...Should we call the cops?
Another dude: No point. The law doesn't reach out to this garbage heap. That man is one of the Bluejam pirates...they give money to the nobles...their crimes and murders are allowed in this land. No matter how many corpses this garbage heap gets...garbage is garbage.

Porchemi: Answer me!!
Luffy: ...I won't talk...
Porchemi: Damn brat, don't protect secrets to become an adult! (I can't localize this for the life of me lol)
Porchemi continues to pound Luffy, Luffy cries
Luffy: I won't talk!!! I won't talk!!
Porchemi pulls out a sword
Porchemi: Then enough! Die!
Luffy: ?!

Ace and Sabo: Stop!!!!
The two break into the shack
Porchemi: !!!!!
Pirates: These guys! Porchemi! These are the guys that took the money! Son of a bitch!
Porchemi glares that them (I think)
Luffy: A--Ace!!
Luffy cries loud

Porchemi grabs Ace
Porchemi: If you've come yourself then this won't take long.
Ace: ?!!
Porchemi: Your friend has a tight mouth and it caused me trouble.
Ace: Sabo!
Porchemi: Huh?
Sabo: Uwaaaaaaah!
Sabo hits Porchemi with the pole he had
Pirates: Porchemi!
The Pirates panic
Porchemi collapses

In the opening Sabo steals a knife from the pirates
Pirates: Ah! A knife!
Sabo cuts Luffy loose and runs away with him
Sabo: Run, Ace!
Ace: Go on ahead!
Ace waits as Porchemi gets up
Sabo: ?! You idiot!
Ace: Once we've faced each off I won't run away!
A shot of Ace getting ready

Sabo: Stop it! Your opponent has a sword! He's different from the punks in town!
Porchemi: Hey...you've done something wicked (I don't know this) Why don't you just quietly hand over the money?
Ace: We can use it better than you can.
Porchemi: Quit talking crap!
Porchemi gets pissed
Sabo: You...wait!
Sabo sets Luffy down and backs up Ace
Porchemi cuts both the pole and Ace's forehead with his sword
Porchemi: If I lose to a brat, I'll quit being a pirate!
Ace bleeds from his forehead and an angry Sabo jumps in
Porchemi is calm and Luffy is silent

Changes to nighttime
Bluejam: I heard the details...Porchemi is pathetic.
Pirates: Really? You...!
Porchemi is all beaten up
Porchemi: I'm sorry captain...that money was...
Bluejam: Don't look at me. I don't even want to see your face.
Bluejam shots Porchemi dead.

Scene changes
Luffy: waaaaah wahh or whatever
Luffy cries
Sabo: You're so evil Ace! To say "I won't run" up against a real pirate...why do you have to have a death wish like that?!
Sabo gets angry and Ace gets quiet again
Sabo: Ha...having done this Bluejam's crew won't forgive us...they'll come after us now.
Luffy keeps crying
Luffy: I was scared...I thought I was dead.
Ace: Shut up! How long are you going to cry for? I hate weaklings and crybabies, they get on my nerves!
Ace gets angry and slaps Luffy, he stops crying.
Ace: Oh.
Luffy: ....thank you.
He bows his head to Luffy and Sabo
Ace and Sabo: ....
While thanking them he begins to cry again
Luffy: Th...thank you for saving me!
Ace: You ass!
Sabo: Hey hey! He's just thanking us.
Sabo stops the angry Ace
Ace: Anyway...why didn't you tell them?! Those guys would kill a woman or child without a problem!
Luffy: ...if I talked, we couldn't be friends anymore.
Ace: Not being friends is better than dying! Why do you want to be friends with me so much? Just how do you look at me? You've gone and followed me all this way!!

Luffy cries all teary/snotty
Luffy: But I have nobody else to depend on!
Ace: ?!
Luffy: I can't go back to Fusha village, and I hate mountain bandits! If I didn't go after you...
Ace: .......
Luffy: Being on my own...being alone is so painful for me!!
Ace: Your parents...?
Luffy: I don't have any other than gramps!
Ace: So if I'm with you it's not painful...if I'm not with you...you're troubled.
Luffy: Yeah.

Flashback
"What if Roger had a child?! Gahahaha it would suck for that guy!
"He is birth and life wouldn't be forgiven! A demon!"

Back to present (as in the current flashback)
Ace: You...want me to live?
Luffy: ?!....Of course I do!
Ace: I see...but I hate naïve little brats like you.
Luffy: I'm not naïve/mushy!! I'm strong!!
Ace: Strong? How are you strong? Even though you're a man you cry!
Luffy: Have you ever been punched with a spike?! I'm 7 years old! When I turn ten like you I'll definitely be strong and not cry!
Ace: Even if I was seven I wouldn't cry! You idiot! Don't group me with you!

Luffy: I'm going to be stronger than everyone! I promised Shanks I would be a great pirate!
Luffy and Ace are spreading fireworks
Ace: A pirate? You?!
Sabo: Hey...by the way...a problem has come up for me.
Ace/Luffy: ?
Sabo: Up until now I've lived in this garbage heap...but as of today our lives are being sought after by pirates, right?

Scene changes to Dadan's hideout
Dadan: What the hell is the meaning of this?! Ace! Luffy! Who is this guy?!
Sabo shakes hands with the shouting Dadan
Sabo: Yo! You're Dadan? I'm Sabo.
Dadan: Sabo?! I know that name! I heard you're quite the damn brat!
Sabo: I see...I've also heard that you're a damn ol hag!
Dadan: Unnecessary information!

"By being chased, Ace and his good friend Sabo now live together in the uncertain gray terminal"
They head out toward the mountain from the hideout and are yelled at by Dadan.
Dadan: you guys! I have to look after you so do some work!
Ace: Luffy! Don't follow us!
Luffy: I'll follow!

Ace, Sabo, and Luffy. Soon these three would do nothing all day and night but fight with the beasts of the mountain road and jungles, and town's punks, the scoundrels of the garbage heap and the bay's pirates. This bad reputation would soon come to the land and reach the streets.

Dadan: Dogura! Magura! Where is "Goa"?
The turban guy is probably Dogura
Dogura: Well, in general, this Colb mountain, garbage heap, and Fusha village are all part of the dominion of the Goa Kingdom.
Dadan: Right?
Magura: (Not sure about this line, but I think it's commenting on Dadan rarely reading a newspaper)
Dadan: They say a visitor is coming to this land? It's becoming kinda big news...but what an uproar...is this guy really such a big deal? A "Tenryuubito".
Ends showing the hideout.
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Nagyon ígéretes!
[spoiler]Ebben a fejezetben befejeződött ez az egész Bluejam dolog, és belekeveredik (majd a következő fejezetben) a flashback történetébe egy World Noble is!
Így már érdemes várni a következő hétre![/spoiler]

[LuckyDingo]

Doublepost... ha valakit érdekel a chapter és nem késtem el vele:
http://mangastream.com/read/one_piece/75222014/2

[blackronin]

Doublepost... ha valakit érdekel a chapter és nem késtem el vele:
http://mangastream.com/read/one_piece/75222014/2

Milyen doublepost? 
Én csak egyet látok...

Ja és köszi a linket!

A fejezetről: nem OPIC és nem EPIC, de jó volt.
Főleg azért, mert "láttam" az értelmét (Luffy és Ace barátság alapja megszületett, Sabo csatlakozott hozzájuk, jobban megismertük Luffy szülőfalujának környékét és viszonyait, megtörtént az előkészítés a "tragédiához" -> World Noble dolog, s amibe ők benne vannak, az sohase sülhet el jól), így nagyon várom a következő hetet!
Én kb. még 2 fejezetet adok a flashback-nek, s utána visszatérünk a jelenbe.


edit: enyhe foreshadowing...
http://www.onemanga.com/One_Piece/497/16/
Luffy: "It's them..."
(tehát kinézetre felismerte a Wolrd Noble-t, de nem tudta hogy ez a nevük...)

[Squazee2005]

Na, így megkésve ugyan, de lássuk, mink van:

Oké volt a fejezet, egy kicsit meghosszabbítja a flashback idejét, de ne bánom még a dolgot. Kíváncsi vagyok, hogy mi lesz ebből. Ismerve Ace-t és Luffy-t, valahogy nem tudnám elképzelni, hogy Sabo esetleges megölését egy World Noble által, ne akarnának bosszút állni. Ám egy WN megtámadásáról tudjuk, milyen súlyos bűn, kétlem, hogy szó nélkül elsimították volna az ügyet, illetve, hogy később Sengoku Ace "vádiratát" felolvasva kihagyott volna egy ilyen jelentős eseményt stb. stb..
Azt is kétlem, hogy bárki meg tudná fékezni SAce-t vagy Luffyt, ha Saboról van szó. Szóval ötleetm sincs, ezért kíváncsi vagyok, mi lesz.

[Kraivan]

Na, így megkésve ugyan, de lássuk, mink van:

Oké volt a fejezet, egy kicsit meghosszabbítja a flashback idejét, de ne bánom még a dolgot. Kíváncsi vagyok, hogy mi lesz ebből. Ismerve Ace-t és Luffy-t, valahogy nem tudnám elképzelni, hogy Sabo esetleges megölését egy World Noble által, ne akarnának bosszút állni. Ám egy WN megtámadásáról tudjuk, milyen súlyos bűn, kétlem, hogy szó nélkül elsimították volna az ügyet, illetve, hogy később Sengoku Ace "vádiratát" felolvasva kihagyott volna egy ilyen jelentős eseményt stb. stb..
Azt is kétlem, hogy bárki meg tudná fékezni SAce-t vagy Luffyt, ha Saboról van szó. Szóval ötleetm sincs, ezért kíváncsi vagyok, mi lesz.

Van azért egy hős nagyapjuk ha ez a vonal futna.

[blackronin]

585
[spoiler]
Csak egy korai, de még nem confirmed, spoiler alapján a következőről szól a fejezet:
-the Tenryuubito want child slaves
-Sabo, Luffy and Ace get in a fight with someone
-Ace is knocked out
-Sabo talks to Ace about becoming a pirate and Ace promises to become a strong pirate
-Sabo dies
-Ace and Luffy become brothers
-Present: Jinbei tells Luffy that Ace lives on in his heart

Ez még nem jelent semmit, hiszen fake is lehet, de nekem bejönne...
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[Squazee2005]

Hm... érdekesen hangzik. Meglátjuk, mi lesz belőle.

Amúgy az Arlong Park Character Tournamenten már zajlanak az első kör mérkőzései, érdekes például, hogy [spoiler]Garp megverte Akainut 494-216-ra, vagy hogy Going Merry és Kaku meccse 385-380-ra végződött, most pedig Crocodile földbe döngöli Rob Luccit.[/spoiler] Na persze még hosszú a nap

[LuckyDingo]

Hm... érdekesen hangzik. Meglátjuk, mi lesz belőle.

Amúgy az Arlong Park Character Tournamenten már zajlanak az első kör mérkőzései, érdekes például, hogy [spoiler]Garp megverte Akainut 494-216-ra, vagy hogy Going Merry és Kaku meccse 385-380-ra végződött, most pedig Crocodile földbe döngöli Rob Luccit.[/spoiler] Na persze még hosszú a nap

nem vagyok tisztában vele, hogy ez mi is akar lenni, de ahogy elnézem egy popularity contest, aminek nincs semmi értelme.. XDD

[Squazee2005]

Fején találtad a szöget.  Nincs értelme, de haláli jó, ahogy egy-két szereplőnek kampányolnak. Már csak ezért is benézek oda. [spoiler][/spoiler]

Kár, hogy most nincs korai spoiler. Azért utálom, ha hétfői spoilerekkel kényeztetnek, mert amikor nincs, akkor fájó a hiánya. _._ Jó, azért kibírom.